Another day going through old files on my computer and discarding some of the rubbish that has accumulated. I came across a poem about Oxford that I wrote a while ago and thought it may be worth posting to see if there is any feedback. Yesterday was also a little out of the ordinary as I published my second book "Three of a Kind" on Kindle. It's three short stories and quite different in nature to my first Kindle book "Reflections Tall Stories and Short Poems". Anyhow try my poem and see what you think.
Oxford
By
David
Higgins
I
can almost see Oxford from here
Dreaming
Spires lazy picnics cloudy beer
Eights
on the Thames rowing as one
Students
in punts just having fun
Willow
strokes leather around the Parks
Retire
to the pub for high jinks and larks
Bicycles
leaning against college walls
Sightseeing
parties obstructing the Broad.
I
can almost see Oxford from here
Clean-cut
athletes on cinders appear
The
starters gun fires to signal the off
Straight
down to business for eager young Toffs
Ibbotson
sets the pace Bannister sits poised
He
wins in sub four listen to the noise
History
was made on the Iffley road track
The
standard was set no going back.
I
can almost see Oxford from here
The
Izigonis revolution is near
Tired
models and staid old designs
Choking
life from the factory lines
Enter
the Mini cool funky and fun
Bright
colours turn heads of both old and the young
It’s
had a face-lift or two in its time
Larger
more comfy than old ones of mine.
I
can almost see Oxford from here
Fans
rise to their feet and cheer
Ron
Atkinson Tony Jones Maurice Kyle
Use
a mixture of brute force and guile
To
dash Blackburn’s cup dreams once more
Division
one side are ousted by four
Dreams
of Wembley were quickly dashed
Preston
North End and Kendal saw to that.
I
can see Oxford from here
Mist
that descended has cleared
Cars
still roll from assembly lines
Foreign
owned but never mind
United
have moved from the old Manor Ground
To
the Kassam stadium with seats all around
Dark
Blue sportsmen play hard but fair
Forging
bonds that in business later they’ll share
Colleges
still attract the cream of the crop
Brilliant
young minds who strive for the top.